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Say hello to 22-year-old model, Nicole. She's very new to modeling. She enjoys taking pictures and see the artistic outcome. She has done everything including classy, rough, sexy, and lingerie. She paticularly likes working with cars; classic cars, exotic, lowriders, muscle, and even street bikes. Her favorite movie is "Cruel Intentions," directed by Roger Kumble. She listens to rap music such as Ying Yang Twins, Lil' John, and Ludacris. You should put all the things that go together first. Say hello to 22-year old model, Nicole. A newcomer to modelling, she has modelled everything from the classy to sexy lingerie. She enjoys photography and likes tinkering with all kinds of cars as well as street bikes. Her favorite movie is Roger Krumble's "Cruel Intentions". She also likes listening to rap artists namely Ying and Yang twins, Lil'John and Ludacris. Source(s): I omitted some of the none essentials, sometimes less is more. Like seeing the artistic outcome, sentence is really off. Its realy good to me there is no mistakes seeing, and particularly. Ever hear of spell-grammar check? "seeing the outcome" and "exotics" are the only grammatical changes I'd make. Otherwise is great. She enjoys taking pictures and SEEING the the artistic outcome. Otherwise it sounds ok. Myself--an English teacher. |
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