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What do you think of my poem?


Your thighs strain as your bike
runs wild through the submerged road.
You feel sequestered from reality.
Your body is the battleground for
a cavalcade of tiny water spheres.
The water mimics the shade of sunset.
Your smile tickles your ears
as you enjoy the simple wonders
this world offers.

i agree with cody
just tighten it up a bit
(put it away for awhile, then look at it again)
poetry and free verse
have almost lost their boundaries
It sounds to me like free verse, I like it even though it doesn't flow well. It should be subjected to revision as far as my opinion goes.
It doesn't have to rhyme to be poetry, but I don't really like it. What matters is that YOU like it, though.
what is it about? ii dont get it...
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