Poem i did a while back. comments please.?

Why Must She Suffer?

I鈥檝e noticed a few things about human beings
We tend to pollute beautiful scenes with material things
We sing songs of peace even though we cease to respect the trees
What else do we have to prove with our fossil fuels?
After following the clues I鈥檝e discovered some bad news
We are creating issue after issue with the one that keeps us afloat
We destroy her landscape to create get-a-ways from the darker days
Global warming is upon us
F*ck congress
We need to take matters into our own hands
F*ck the twenty-year plans proposed by your local congressman
We need to take it back to the days when things were safe
When sunlight was the light of life
And riding your bike was alright
Eliminate the overpopulated highways
Bring on the mass transit systems
Let your clothing sway in the wind
Don鈥檛 use the dryer except for winter time my friend
We need to begin again
Our ancestors lived simple lives
Never were there smiles to hide
No more
Let鈥檚 take back our Earth and hug our dear Mother
Why must she suffer?

I think it's pretty good.
Some of it sounds more like a letter to me than a poem.
Nice work:)

It has touched me and I believe in your passion to recognize the inconvenient truth. Yes indeed we have been abusive so much and this poem must reach the many. I think however that there is no need to use the F word in such a dramatic poem. Although, I think this would make a good song composition. cheers!