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A love poem for you. Tell what you think? |
you have the eyes of many oceans.So wide but yet so full.the heart of angel.surronded by the light of grace.the first time that I had ever seen your face.Was when the mornings dawn was just coming in.What beauty,what peace.I love to hear you say these three words,"I love you".they make me feel like I have just been born.My first bike,my first crush,my first date.But yet you wasn't there.Was you or was you.Some how I feel like you were.Not in body.But in love.you were getting me ready for the day that I first laid eyes on you.That at my eyes first glance.I felt like I've known you forever.but I must have.Because now I know that I was always supose to be with you.That i will never fall in love with another woman.Because I love you.I truely love you. What Does this poem say to you. WOW!!!!! YOU SURELY TOUCHED MY HEART!!!! So simple words but full of emotions!!!! Congratulations! Why don't you try to go on a poem contest? I write poems too. When I'm sad, it's easier to me to write down my feelings. Maybe the words that expess pain are ''stronger'' than the words of happiness. I wrote once a poem for a contest and they gave me a memorable award. Keep on the good work!!!! IT IS OK BUT NOT WRITTEN OUT PROPERLY!! THAT DOES NOT ATTRACT THE READER! very romantic You have to much time on your hand. You're the most romantic guy that i ever met and you have so sensitive emotions, you love to respect your lady and give her all your love, you're a rare kind, and a pure heart. I just wish i could have a BF like you cz i beleive that "love is only a word until you meet someone who gives it meaning". Who knows maybe someday i will. live it today,go through it tomorrow, u have to rewrite it,something is missing, some personal touch to it is needed It is a really good poem about love. This part kinda throws me a little thought (But yet you wasn't there.Was you or was you.)I think it would sound better if you said Buy yet you weren't their. Were you or weren't you not their.Just a suggestion. I love the meaning of the poem It symbolizes waiting for your sole mate and finding them! I love it! Keep up the good work! |
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