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Can u plz proof read this... thanx :p, how can i end it? |
鈥淐hildren should always wear a helmet while riding their bikes.鈥? That common statement points the truth, in that safety should be the number one concern in everything we do. Safety should never be an after thought. Teaching children essential lessons when they are young is a safe investment in their futures. It should be obligatory to wear bicycle helmets, considering so as heading injuries liability for most of the ones that are endured in cases where helmets were not worn. The cost of long term care for head injuries is very high, not to reveal the insurance matters. By insuring that children wear helmets, we are training them that safety measurers are constantly not obligatory. Just as wearing a seat belt in a car is mandatory; it should be likewise intended for wearing a helmet, while riding a bike. Choosing not to wear helmets whereas riding a bicycle is not a risk worth taking. The danger to the child is not the only concern. In the case of a car- bicycle crash, there is the problem of accountabilities to be paid, likely by the driver of the car. If the one riding the bicycle had been wearing a helmet, the costs all around could be kept down, plus the loss of lives could be cut way down. Mandatory helmet requirements also prompt organizations to put up money to buy helmets for those who could not afford them. OK, I don't normally do this but I'm bored. Please note that where I have used capitals that I am NOT shouting, just merely indicating where I have changed the wording. 鈥淐hildren should always wear a helmet while riding their bikes.鈥?br /> That common statement points TO THE FACT that safety should be the number one concern in everything we do. Safety should never be an after thought. Teaching children THE essential lessons when they are young is a safe investment in their futures. It should be obligatory to wear bicycle helmets, considering THE NUMBER OF HEAD, SOMETIMES FATAL INJURIES THAT OCCUR in cases where helmets were not worn. The cost of long term care for head injuries is very high, not to MENTION the insurance matters. By insuring that children wear helmets, we are training them that safety measures ARE BEING PUT INTO PLACE FOR THEIR OWN BENEFIT . Just as wearing a seat belt in a car is mandatory; it should ALSO BE THE SAME for wearing a helmet while riding a bike. OPTING TO FORE GO THE USE OF A helmet when riding a bicycle is a risk NOT worth taking. The danger to the child is not the only concern. In the case of a car - bicycle crash, there is the problem of INSURANCE PAYOUTS, HOSPITAL BILLS AND THE LIKE WHICH WILL MOST PROBABLY BE THE DRIVERS' RESPONSIBILITY. If the one riding the bicycle had been wearing a helmet, the costs all around could be kept down, NOT TO MENTION THE REDUCTION IN FATALITIES Mandatory helmet requirements also prompt organizations to HELP FUND THE PURCHASING OF helmets for those who could OTHERWISE not afford them. Good attempt overall but I just found you may have overcomplicated some parts which I have tried to simplify for easier reading. Hope I have helped, good luck. second paragraph u wrote measurers instead of measures . Hope this helps ! 鈥淐hildren should always wear a helmet while riding their bikes.鈥? That common statement points out the truth, that safety should be the number one concern in everything we do. Safety should never be an after thought. Teaching children essential lessons when they are young is a safe investment in their futures. It should be obligatory to wear bicycle helmets, considering the amount of head injuries endured in cases where helmets were not worn. The cost of long term care for head injuries is very high and could be prevented if helmets were mandatory. By insuring that children wear helmets, we are training them that safety measures are paramount. Just as wearing a seat belt in a car is required; wearing a helmet while riding a bicycle should also be consistently mandated. Choosing not to wear a helmet when riding a bicycle is not a risk worth taking. The danger to the child is not the only concern. In the case of a car- bicycle crash, there is the problem of accountabilities to be paid, likely by the driver of the car. If the person riding the bicycle had been wearing a helmet, the costs all around could be kept down and there would be decrease in the number of lives lost. Many children come from homes with very limited income. Although these families may be able to afford a bicycle, they are unable to provide a helmet for their child/children to wear. Mandatory helmet requirements may prompt organizations to provide money to buy helmets for those who could not afford them. To finish, you just need to sum up what you have written already. Hope this helps some! Good luck. |
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